Reader comments from MXit

Below are some of the comments left by readers of Kontax 2: The Big Win on MXit on the first day that the story launched. Most comments were complimentary, but there were also a few criticisms of the story, something that we didn’t get in Kontax 1. Perhaps because we’re not offering prize money for comments in this round?

** CHAPTER 1

Karabo: It is n0t dat bad at al,i l0ve it:P

Diamond gal: Hey der,chapter 1 is brilliant but a little repeat of da
previous part but hey great.i wuld lyk 2 put some spice n i mean hot
spice in dis story. am such a gud writter.bt hey ur stry is awesome.

Ilyaaz: 0mg!i f3el bad 4 airtime n sbu,lmao

Sphiwe: Chapter 1 is very interesting and funny, confusing at some
points bt i lyk it

Xoliswa: The story z gr8 am lovng t,ive alwayz enjoyd readng kontax
since da 1st part,and am lukng 4ward 2 da cumng chaptrz…keep t up

Nomsa: I like it.bt it still need more attention.like jokes and more….

Nqobile: Al i cn say is,r u goin 2 make a movie bcoz id realy lyk 2 c
it.This is so intertainin i wuldnt evn mynd evn if it was a daily
soapie.

Angel: Chapter 1 is nt prety clear bcoz u should hv startd 4rm wer
kontax 1 ended 2 clearify da new chapter

Thando: The story startz in a great way,mst say da linking 4rm da 1st
kontax 2 da 2nd kontax ws superbly dne! Swt,kyp up da great work

Ricardo: Due 2 the last chapter i read 4rm kontax 1 and throughout the
story, i found that it was really amazing and fresh…bt reading
chapter 1 of kontax 2,it seem 2 me that the story has lost that
exciting feeling that makes you wanna read more. But because kontax 1
was so gr8, i thought, why not go ahead on reading chapter 2 of kontax
2? And so i did, 2 find that im accualy starting 2 enjoy it same as i
did with kontax 2.

lo: dis chapter its very nice n interesting it says read more..if r u
wit me:D

Mabel: Chapter 1 ws gr8,actually da whole story is xcitin.DA FUNNY
THING IZ I ONLY STARTED READIN DA STORY Y.DAY ND IM HOOKED.KIP UP DA
GUD WRK GUYZ:D

Dida: I like to undastand wat u people saying but i can’t

Des: I think this was a well written chapter. . .its what i expect in
every book i read because now that i have read, i definetly want 2
continue read. . .its a great chapter…i definetly would come 2 u if i
wanted lesson on how 2 write a book

Noxolo: Great start guyz i lov ur story it realy rocks its interesting
thz alot 2 learn in it

Tracy: I luv it bt it bgns slw

Tumelo: Hidding names its nt that helping,putting the cameramen’s name
could have helped to lead to the next chapter

Princess: Y dnt u make a big story nt a shrt 1?

Eugene:    Wow dis is reali a gr8t story. Nd dis shows
dat der r truli gr8t frnds out der wu protects u 4rn dangerous thngs

Sbuda: So far i’m thrilled with chapter one hope to see more chapters
and if there are any auditions please call me

PERCY: I LYK DA WAY K8 HANDLES HER FRND AIRTYM ND SBU

Nancy: I thnk its nt as interestin nd as nice as chaptor 1 of the first
story

Monique: It’s a cool way to start off the new chapters! I was hooked on
the first series of stories bt these are way better?(G)

Zaquisha: Ai dis ding r0ckz m0s

Swagnificent: I got bored , make the first part more interesting

Naledi: Ur story teach us abt tings whch r hapning in our daily lifes.

Patience: Dis is de best myb is because i read kontax1 long time ago nd
enjoyed it but kontax 2 is de best

Sugar: I like the new kontax story already, i feel its freshness and it
does totaly help most of us work like read with extending our knowledge
and vocabulary. Our charecters seem to be more matured now and they a
making a living out of their life. I the part of airtime winning a quiz
online, most people who are kontax subscriber are more related to him.
I remember when i first won my R100, i was soo over the moon tat i
couldnt believe it. Keep up the gud work guy, i so keen to read more.

males: I thnk m gng to enjy readng ths story it seems lyk itz gng to b
mre crzie and adventurous than kontax issue 1 session one:D

** CHAPTER 2

Lebo: The 4 friend actually make a very gud group coz k8 seems like 1
who knws hw 2 keep order in the group,sbu is the 1 who gves gud
advise,song is the 1 who helps out in times of trouble nd airtyme is
the crazy1 in the group he makes it 2 b fun .good combination

Bonolo: Yoh Airtime is extremeley xctd hey!:D.

Tlou: Lol airtime is just out of ths world…i think he’s awesome

Lebohang: I thnk airtime shud listen 2 hs frndz,internet competitions r
nt 100 percent gud,smthn bad myt hapen,even if the organisers r gud,he
dsnt hav a gud plan 4 de mney nd nt remembering dt de mney dt is goin
out nd nt getin in fnsh fast

Wendy: Itz wise of Airtime to spend the money on his dreams.

arriya: was ok

Octavia: The story is so amazin i cnt wait 2 read chapter 3.C u in
chapter 3

Eve: I totaly love the book😀 awesome piece of work!

Tumelo: The competition that airtym won didnt state any age restriction
and how can a teenage like him go and collect the price by himself ?

KGANTSHI: AIRTIME IS QUIET A CHARACTER AND I LIKE THAT

sibongile: Airtyms character is funny nd its gr8 4 pple lyk me who lve
laughin

Angel: Ur sentences hv 2much errors as i ws reading

Luwanda: Chapter 2 is vry excitin! Da choice of words give a fill of
being part of da stry like u cn jst see evrythng happin ryt in front of
u

Phumlani Ratya: Eish i have a feeling this is nt going to end well, y?
B.coz wen u r that exited 2 recieve sumthing u usually dnt get it so
lets wait n c

** CHAPTER 3

Lerato: Its nt fair 4 mfundo 2 gve 2 thousand 1st while he cant even
see dat money nd by the way they are crookin him bcoz they never tell
dat he was going 2 pay 1st before he gt dt quiz money.

Charolynne: I think that there could b mre characterz inv0lved in dis

The code: Nice romance!

Mbalee: Ah ah ah oh no wat a scam cmon Air u shud knw beta

Lehlohonolo: Now this chapter makes the reader wonder even more. It’s
very good but there’s 1 or 2 typing errors.

Boitumelo: I dnt buy de fact dat airtime should pay R200 for hm 2 get
his price, itz a competition he won they should give him his price,
they where no terms and conditions

Buhle: Chapter 3 makes me think that the two guys who r abot 2 giv
Airtime the money are crooks n u want2 if they realy are

** CHAPTER 4

Nelisiwe: So u telling me this what really happens when people win
competitions?

Lebohang: Airtime dsnt c dt de organisers r crucks,nd hs 2 damn anxious
2 b aware of de situation!

Lungelo: Things are getting interesting now

Lee: B4 singin any 4rm of paper u must read da fine print hpe he did

** CHAPTER 5

Zama: Sbu shuld tel k8 dat he lyks her soon

The code: U gotta point there, stuff should be easier!

** CHAPTER 6

Juicy: i think dis chaptr is 2 cute. it remind me alot about me n my
exbf n da ow first kiss! i mis him alot

Cynthia: I thnk k8 n sbu shud d8. i also wsh we ddnt hve 2 read part 2
on the 24th of March,because once you start reading the story you dont
want to stop bt thn now you hve  2 stay curious. your story realy
attracts ppl in zulu u would say siyabaHEHA abantu! i promise 2 be the
1st 1 to read part 2 wen it cmes out:)

Joseph: Finally Sbu made a move,n should do this more often(kiss)

arriya: boring.

Tshegofatso: Wt da crew was wrong dy shudve find an info abt street
trading n running away 4rm da cops was not a cleverest choice,wt k8 n
sbu felted 4 each othr i thnk dy shud do smthng abt it n stop making
excuses.

Thati: YAY! FINALLY THEY KISSD, I HPE THS MEANS THEY R DATING!

Fernando: Heart-stopping action at break-neck speeds … pure genius!

sibongile: i realy love the story expecialy chapter 6 i love the part
where sbu and k8 kiss,its so romantic keep it up kontax cant wait for
the next part!

Thandi: Good one Airtime…lol i bet u were busy talking while on the
run. As for s’bu and k8 i wasn’t expecting that 4rm u 2, kissing?
Whoa…:-|

** CHAPTER 7

Nelisiwe: Wow,cnt w8 4 Chapter 8 to 14

Khwezi: Agh. Man airtym is being stupid, even my younger sista wud
figure owt its a scam wen they sed they want 2 thousand and she only a
week old

Herbert: Wat a book 4 me coz its first time 2 read a book 4rm ma mobile

Palesa: Ah! poor boy  he rily need dat money sorry airtime.as frm
today i will never play da internet quiz games😦 i love u airtime,sbu
nd k8 u rock guys (x)

Nomonday: It realy is intresting even more than the first one.

Donovan: Ya,i really thnk the competition is a scam,bcoz they asked
Mfundo for money,agg,c’mon.everybdy cn c it dat is a scam except Airtym
coz all he ever thnk abt is that R50 000,whch he neva won at da 1st
place,all jst a scam

Corlia: Lve the story but why must we wait for the second part?

Sethu: Luv de story nd defnately cnt wait 4 part 2

Sibuthe: Its a great 1st part, i makes me wanna c wat gonna happend in
da 2nd part, hope da kotax fnd out wats goin on;)

Firdaws: The first half was fab cant wait for the other…. 24 March
better cum soon… keep it up… lots of love (*)twinkle(*)

Zo: It’s a terrific story-couldn’t write a better 1 even if I
tried.Hope K8 nd Sbu end up 2gether

Boitumelo: Sbu,k8 nd airtime they should listen 2 songezwa more often,
bcz she was work wth computers doin all kinds of things.so she knows
this thnks

Anoniem: Awww man guyz!I love da st0RY!I CANT WAIT TILL 24 MARCH!Ill go
mad!I think song is right it is jst a scam po0r AiRtImE f0ol 4 nt
believin her!(What a shocker)

GOMZA: I would like to congratulate u on making part 1 a
fascinating  part of the story ..it surely hookd me up i cnt wait
4 part 2 of dz st0ry

Asanda: This is grate story, always enjoyed reading kotax. I hope dat
Mfundo a.k.a Airtime will realise that this a scam. But i love all the
characters, they advice each other.

siyabonga: Damnn.. I gotta say dic story iz amazin.. Ive finishd al
part 1, gr8 adventure, m half wae dne wit part 2! Nd wel ayi mfundo bru
b patient youl get yo money(G) lol i hpe! Kontax rockz my mxit! Kip up
da gud work guyz!

Jermaine: This is a typical south african scam incident, where the
winner doesn’t believe what’s right infront of them. Well done to the
writers. Hope the second part we actually discover that K8 and Sbu get
serious, but whether Airtime gets his money or not, atleast he has
friends who are willing to bend over backwards for each other. Thank
you, it’s a very interesting story.

Cebo: I like your story it teaches us as kids to open our eyes against
scam from the internet,and don’t do things without having real proof of
what you’ve won.

Tash: Da chapter is very gud, u can see dat song cares abt her 4rnds. I
lyk da way she tries 2 tell her 4rnd da bad news in a polite and humble
way. Da chapter is HOT

Sticks: Th story was gud at al bcz i thnk it advc our not 2 gv a strng
ur dtis thkz

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